Tuesday, November 1, 2016

Novel Idea, Day 1

Away we go, Kids!!!  Thanks for everyone taking part in this experiment.  I hope you find it a worthwhile journey.  As stated previously, there's no obligation to share, but if you so desire, I will be more than happy to post your sharing here if you wish.  What I'm after, more than anything else, is for people to enjoy writing fiction - or, at least getting ideas about fiction writing.  So, happy journeying, everyone - may it be enjoyable for you!!

Theme: Phrase - "The Red Brick Machine"

Initial thoughts: Is it a machine that makes red bricks?  A machine MADE of bricks? Is this a thing that already exists, or something I need to make up?  If I need to make it up, what does it DO - because, after all, that's the point of a machine - to DO something.  What if the word, "machine" is a moniker?  Perhaps it's not a mechanical device, but something else more "processed"?  That's when it hit me, and the following is my unedited offering of the topic.

     Andrew looked back as he walked across the quad.  It was the last time he’d ever walk out that door, down those steps, and across the expanse of green that served as the pastoral introduction to the school, and he couldn’t be happier.  Of course, it wasn’t really a school at all, but a large mansion on a hill that overlooked the sleepy little town of Tarrenton Plain.
     The town itself was nothing special.  It was your standard Hudson Valley town, whose mix of large and small colonial houses set close together, their pitched roofs able to handle the winter snows of New York, looked like every other sleepy little town.  It didn’t stand out in any way.  The town itself was a leftover of the old Tarrenton Planation, from where it took its name.  The Tarrenton family was long gone, now, and the land was broken up so that the plantation boundaries were no longer of any relevance, but vestiges of old stacked stone fences could still be found here and there.  If you looked hard enough, you might see how Washington Irving could have written his more famous works.  The inspiration was all around, and Andrew knew he would never see it again.
     He waved at the uppermost window of the great house, a tradition that every one of his predecessors did.  They all joked about it, what they would feel when they were finally allowed to leave the house and set out into the world.  Andrew now knew what that felt like.  It was nothing like what he imagined.  There was a certain finality to it, to know you would never be back, to never be allowed to write a letter to your younger compatriots.  Those were the rules, and they were held to strictly.
     The rules of the Mansion were clear, and once you were there, you spent years having them drilled into you, to the exclusion, often, of the rules of anywhere else.  Andrew knew the rules backwards, forwards, upside-down, in a mirror, and even in his sleep.  He dreamed of them.  He knew they could never be broken, and that, of course, was the point of the Mansion.  It was a school, and it was a lifestyle.  Those selected to the school were brought in and secluded from the world, where they were educated in economics, business, leadership, and many of the finer things in life.  But above all were the Rules.
     The rules were so important, so essential to the track of every student who passed through the doors, that the school earned a nickname amongst its alumni: The Red Brick Machine.  It was precise, it was succinct, it was brutally efficient.  Now that he was out, Andrew’s responsibility for his years at the school were simple: Make money, amass power, and provide for one future tenant of the school, both financially and as a mentor when the student was ready to leave.  And, of course, never talk about the Mansion.  Not even in private.  Secrecy was of the utmost importance, and you never knew who was listening.
     Andrew turned his back to the Mansion, and began his walk down the hill into town.  It was the way they all left the school, with nothing but a knapsack and the few personal belongings they were allowed to have.  He was to catch the bus to the city from there, and then, his life would begin in earnest.  It was a life of privilege, of wealth, or prosperity, all guided by the Rules that ran the Mansion.  He was a member of the most elite class, now.  They ran everything from the New York Stock Exchange to the policies of the federal government.  They were untouchable, protected.  Safe in their financial castles, they set the policy for the United States.  From there, they spread out to the world, and their influence was felt everywhere.  Andrew could now call himself one of them.

     The walk into town was faster than he imagined it would be.  He paid for his ticket at the post office that doubled as the Greyhound station, and took a seat on the bench to await the bus into the city.  He pulled the small package he was given from his bag, and opened it.  It contained a pen, a notebook, and a leather-bound copy of Machiavelli’s “The Prince.”  He understood it immediately.  Rule Seven.  He recited it in his head, and put the package back in his knapsack as the bus pulled up to the building.


Thanks for reading,
Me

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