Monday, November 28, 2016

Novel Idea, Days 25 and 26

In the closing stretch, and still playing catch-up from the long holiday weekend!  Here are another two - enjoy!!

Theme:  Magic is real

Initial thoughts:  How do I do this and NOT be like Harry Potter???  Difficult.  That relid upon magic users and non magic users to be apart from one another.  What if they weren't apart, but it was a widely accepted thing?  What if it was accepted as being present, but not accepted as being normal or good??  Hmmmm...Yeah, I think we can do something with that!!!

     The morning dawned with a chill in the air.  It was early in the season for it to start getting cold, but Nel Evesham didn’t care.  The change in temperatures ceased to bother him a long time ago.  He simply uttered the sacred words that invoked the magic, and a small amount of air around him would be affected, insulating him from both heat and cold.  It was undetectable to most people, but then, most people didn’t know about the magic, and how it could be used.  All of that was about to change.
     He knew, as almost every other magic user did, that the Empire had been working for years on trying to identify them all.  They presented a real threat to the balance of power, and the emperor, now old, had become very afraid of what might happen to his legacy when he passed on.  Every magic user dealt with it differently.  Some fled the cities to live out their days in seclusion, some became violent, and many others simply tried to keep about their business, unnoticed.  Nel understood their reasons.  It made sense.  They were afraid of what the Empire might do next, and they were right to. 
     Today was the first day users could be tested and registered.  Nel was as frightened as any of them, but he had another mission this morning.  He dressed as normal, putting on the layers that were necessary only to keep up appearances, and left his small house on the edge of town.  He walked quickly, with a purpose.  Today, he would sign the loan papers from the bank, and then go and register.  By then, it would be too late.  There would be turning back, and it would all be legal.  Those in power would be unable to stop him, and the magic would continue on to another generation.  It was the only way to make it safe for those who, like him, still believed the Empire could be saved.  It would be difficult, of course.  He understood that.  But he was committed.
     He arrived just after the bank opened for his appointment.  He walked in, removed his coat and gloves, and set them down in the waiting area.  It wasn’t long before he was ushered into the private office of Karl Worthington and the two sat down.
     “How’s it going, Nel?  Cole enough for you today?”  He offered his hand.
     “It could be worse,” said Nel.  “But today is exciting for me.”
     “I imagine so!  This business venture of yours looks like a great idea.  I’m glad to see it coming to this town, and look forward to partnering with you on it.  I’ve long thought we needed a school for the gifted.”
     He set a folder thick with papers on his desk. 
     “That looks extensive,” said Nel.
     “They make you sign for everything, these days.  Let’s get started, shall we?”
     “Yes, that would be good.”
     Nel spent the next hour signing his name over and over again, signing the assurance forms, the payment plans, and everything else imaginable.  They sent the paperwork by fax to the home office, and it came back with approval.  All was going perfectly.  They shook hands at the end of that hour, this time as partners.
     “When can my boy enroll?” asked Karl.
     “The school will be finished and ready to accept students beginning just after the holidays.  We’re really looking forward to it.”
     “How is that possible?  Have you been building all this time?”
     “The facility is almost done,” said Nel.  “I think you’ll be surprised just how fast and easy it went up.  Unfortunately, I can’t stay.  I do have a little other business to get through this morning.”
     “I think that statement is going to be your life for a while now, my friend.”
     “I believe you’re correct.”

     Nel left the bank with a sense of relief, but it soon turned to nervousness.  The school would definitely consume most of his time and his life.  But it would be worth it.  Karl didn’t know that it was a school for those gifted with magic.  He’d simply called it “gifted,” and let everyone assume what they might.  He couldn’t take the risk that someone would kill the loan.  But that was done, now.  Now was the hard part.  He would register, and then open the doors to his school for magic.  All the world would see.


Theme:  world-ending plague.  Difficulty: only 5,000 can survive.

Initial Thoughts:  A lot of ways this can go, but the first division is before/after the decision on which 5,000 are to be saved.  I think before offers a little better place to start, because there is the potential for more drama, and even though it smacks of "Deep Impact" in a lot of ways, I think it's the decision-making process that reveals our humanity, both for the good we do and the bad.  Let's go with highlighting that process.

“How many?” asked Tomas.
     “Not nearly as many as we hoped,” said Viktor.  “We just couldn’t get enough supplies together to last-“
     “How many?” interrupted Tomas.
     “Only five thousand.”
     The words hurt.  Only five thousand?  Tomas sat back in his chair, exhausted.  He knew the number would be small, but he thought it would at least be approaching a quarter million. 
     “That can’t be right.  Do the numbers again.”
     “I’ve done them six times, and my assistants are still going.  It hit the supply houses, Tomas.”
     “All of them?”
     “All but one that we were able to get cleaned out first.”
     “Everything we’ve done, then.  It was all a waste.”
     “You can still save five thousand.”
     “How do you pick five thousand people out of millions?  Who would you pick, Viktor?  Because it’s not just picking people to survive, but picking people who wouldn’t mind living in a limited world after the rest of us are gone.  Who do you choose?”
     “Well, the leaders of the world-“
     “Are all idiots, myself included.”
     “You would not go in?”
     “Viktor, I’m old.  There’s no point in saving me.  Besides which, I am the commander-in chief, and this happened on my watch.  I have to shoulder the blame.  It’s the only Presidential thing to do.”
     “But, who will run things?”
     “That will be up to them.”
     “What about your staff?”
     “No one from this staff makes it inside that shelter, Viktor.  Not a single one.”
     Viktor swallowed hard, having just heard his death sentence.  “Yes, Mr. President.”
     “We messed it up, Viktor.  We shouldn’t be allowed to live.  It’s our fault.”
     “Shall I get your Science Advisors, Sir?”
     “No.  We have three days until we have to close the mountain.  Get the first five thousand people you can who are not military and seal them inside.  The rest of us will die.”
     “Sir, if I may – wouldn’t our soldiers be a better example of society?”
     “Viktor, consider this:  we have a chance to end war.  If we save military personnel, we will be continuing war.  This plague?  It’s the result of war.  We need to stop thinking this way.  We need to have NO military present.”
     “Respectfully, Sir, I disagree.”
     “Noted.”
     “You’re not interested in my opinion?”
     Tomas reached for the remote and turned on the television.  The news channels were buzzing with the events of the plague.  There was no outrunning it.  It would eventually consume the entire world.  The only hope was to beat it by going into hiding.
     “Unless your opinion can beat that, Viktor, no, I’m not interested.”
     “So you would just pick a random five thousand people?  How is THAT Presidential?”
     “It’s five thousand people, Viktor.  You want me to choose five thousand of the smartest?  The most fit?  The most elite?  Who?  How can you choose only five thousand?  It doesn’t matter who we choose.  Money won’t matter, technology won’t matter, government won’t matter.  Everyone will have to pitch in and get water, cook, anything they have to do in order to just survive.  No.  Five thousand.  No one over thirty.”

Thanks for reading,

Me

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